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    Lame? You think to low of your work friend =). The art style is perfect for the map. And you have being very attentive for the details.
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    Lame? NO. Looks great and I'm with jbgibson this is pretty unique to me. Makes me look sidelong at that big fern looking thing at my local mall...
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    my one comment on something shaping up real nice is maybe the location names should be IN the stores themselves instead of outside them. I wouldn't worry if a few of them looked cramped afterwards because someone who is writing this out by hand (and not used to writing in limited space) would find themselves short on room more often then not.

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    Hello people.
    So I was out for a few days, doing a freelance job, and was unable to work much with this map. But here it goes a little update, changed the lorem ipsum text for some initial content, more to come later. Hope to finish this in time! Hope you like.

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    This is really good. I love the idea and the execution
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    Hi people.
    So this week I started at my new job, and last week were a really busy one, so I didn´t really had the time to work much on this map. Seen that today is the last day to do entries, I´ll give my incomplete entry. I hope in the future I have the time to finish this properly, or if with a bit of luck the final date will be 11st of October. See you guys.

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    A little update

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    September/October 2012 Lite Challenge: Leblon Mall Outpost-leblonmall6.jpg

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