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Nice map Tim!
I think you have to download directly to your post, not as an attachment, to get the ###LATEST WIP## # thing to put you on the thumbnail page.
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Guild Apprentice
I like it so far! Always in favour of having a bit of a story behind a map. The issues I have with it mostly concern the scroll, but I guess that's my personal pet-peeve. When the sides are rolled up like this it makes me wonder what's on that part of the parchment: seems strange to just have empty space there, no? Also, if you would like a more realistic look to your parchment edges I would suggest looking up images of the Dead Sea Scrolls as reference. A little extreme, but it works!
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The reason it wasn't showing up in the Thumbnails was due to a lack of spaces between the ###'s and the 'Latest WIP'. I added the spaces for you and it's showing up in the thumbs now.
I like this map btw, it's got a slightly "Torstan"-ish look to it.
You may have a couple typos: I think you mean "Insistence" and "Wizards" instead of "Insestance" and "wisards".
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Not to be the grammar police either, but I noticed a few other typos: Second sentence: First found the the gates, should be found that the gates.
Also: He escaped the trap with his last strength and killed the Guild assassins. Unless of course the typos were deliberate to make it look like the text was written that way on purpose.
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