Oh, I'd say you're a big enough fish. That looks great so far! You going to color it? It would look great with painterly watercolors.
looking good T, but there is a bit of a typo in your text...I think it should read "a remindER to us all......"
BTW, I LOVE concept deities
Art Critic = Someone with the Eye of an Artist, Words of a Bard, and the Talent of a Rock.
Please take my critiques as someone who Wishes he had the Talent
Brandon Sanderson, great books btw. Nice snag on a good idea behind your map too. I listened to the whole series as Audio books.
Really like this entry...I would personally like to see it with some light coloring (i.e. semi-transparent), maybe a dark limited earthy tone palette...either way, really cool map.