Here it is.
I am more happy about the colorbalance now. Any comments welcome
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I dont like the new mountains, and would be very happy for some advise.... somehow they look cheesy and cheap... ?
I like the general shapes of the mountains. I am not sure the coloring works for me...it looks kind of polished and/or 3d art effect like (kann es nicht besser umschreiben ^^ ).
I'm trapped in Darkness,
Still I reach out for the Stars
which mean, redraw.... ok
The texture on the mountains isn't so bad, it just has scaling and angle problems. The striped nature of the texture doesn't align with any of the main line elements and I think that was a lot of the problem. The features of the texture seemed to fight with the lines, if that makes sense.