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    I was on the fence for a minute, but I think I like it compared to the last draft.

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    I think it's hard to make out the depth.

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    I can't really tell where the mountains are, but besides that, the maps looks great, good job.

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    Hey there guys! Decided to start working on the general layout. Having some hard tiem finding the right borders, font and other stuff, but Im quite satisfied with it.
    Still have to finish the label of the map, and also try to generate a better terrain for the global view! Also trying to work on my grammar and vocabulary for the layout xD
    Hope you like!

    ### Latest WIP ###
    November 2013 Entry - Valtor Homeworld-valtorhomeworld.jpg

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    This is really beautiful! I love the muted colours, and the whole layout and presentation looks fantastic!

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    I agree this looks fantastic. If I had one nitpic it's that the detail on the globes is not very clear. One thing that might help is to overlay a layer that traces the contours of each landmass. Otherwise fantastic.

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    This is great Carbus! My vote is already yours for sure! Though I agree with Arsheesh about outlines of the globe maps that really need to be refined.

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    Hey there guys thank you for the feedback!
    About the outlines, I was using a low res map, and also the lines were getting messed up, i think it looks better now! Also changed the position of the globes, I just couldnt find the right spot for everthing, but I think it looks better know.
    Still need to complete the infos of the planet, finish the nations, and add a better title!
    @Max I wish I knew how to make borders like you man!

    ### Latest WIP ###
    November 2013 Entry - Valtor Homeworld-valtorhomeworld2.jpg

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    Come on, the border on this one is just great, and the overall color tones aswell, I really like the dedication you put on this map

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    Hey guys, at least I finished it!
    For me it was great, It was my first world map, as also my first political map, and even got to play with heralds and stuff. The most boring part was the Tagging, I guess I put on this around 20 hours of work, and I would say 15 of it were naming, and etc. But Im quite satisfied the way it turned out. Hope you enjoy!

    ### Latest WIP ###
    November 2013 Entry - Valtor Homeworld-valtorhomeworld3.jpg

    High Res of the actual map, if anyone is interested!
    https://www.dropbox.com/s/n7xu4j2ktyx4ipr/planet.jpg
    Last edited by Carbus; 12-01-2013 at 10:31 AM.
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