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Thread: November/December Lite Challenge Entry: Dead Worlds

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    Well as so often happens with my work I have spent a good deal of time looking at this and I don't like it. It is repetitive and kind of silly. I have an idea in my mind and this isn't it. It's not dark enough and there isn't enough clutter and on and on. I do plan on re-working this hopefully more to what I had originally intended.
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    What did you had in mind?

    I think you are tying to go in too many directions at once. You could concentrate on designing the colony ship.

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