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    Started working on the board itself.
    January 2014 Entry - Treasures of Lohan-treasuresoflohan6.jpg

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    Truely a very nice map, I only feel a bit at odds on the forests, the style dont matchup for me.

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    I kinda agree with Sk here, maybe it's because of the blurryness of the forests compared to the outlining work of mountains , rivers and locations?
    Also a few nitpicks on details that caught my eyes:
    - Overlapping : you have a few overlaps here and there, you might want to check them and fix them. Most important are : cliffs overlpapping the town column 4 line 8, mountain overlaps town colummn 14 line 3, terrain outlines overlaps river column 11 line 3.
    - Rivers mouths : they doesn't look very clean, I would erase sticking out parts.

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    Almost there.

    ### Latest WIP ###
    January 2014 Entry - Treasures of Lohan-treasuresoflohan7.jpg

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    You fixed the farm roofs!

    This is looking amazing. And I like seeing it all together, I'm really getting a feel for how to play!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jalyha View Post
    You fixed the farm roofs!

    This is looking amazing. And I like seeing it all together, I'm really getting a feel for how to play!
    Yeah! They really felt weird haha I think its better now! Im creating the Manual now, with rules and everything!

    Thanks @arsheesh!

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    Last edited by Carbus; 01-23-2014 at 06:36 PM.

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    Looks fantastic! And the game sounds way fun just a couple of things I noticed... nitpicky typos/grammar/spelling stuff... I don't know if you care but...

    1) in section 2.1:

    "Everyone starts at the city of Lohan and must travel through the

    2.2 Player turn"

    Think you missed something there

    2) I think you should include a rule for determining who goes first. People can be REALLY immature. Highest dice roll, maybe?

    3) Bodyguard card description: "reffunded" = "refunded".

    4) Section 4: "where he didn't hid the treasure" = "where he didn't hide the treasure"

    (Is the Longitude card supposed to have 2 "o's"?)

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    Finished!

    Rules: https://www.dropbox.com/s/i0lx57ly79...astreasure.pdf
    (Big thanks to Jalyha for the grammar erros!)

    ### Latest WIP ###

    January 2014 Entry - Treasures of Lohan-treasuresoflohan8.jpg
    Last edited by Carbus; 01-27-2014 at 06:45 PM.
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