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Thread: February/March 2014 Lite Challenge: East of the Sun and West of the Moon

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    All done (I think). Only things I'm iffy on are the font and lighting (is it too much?). This might be it folks.

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    Font could be less modern and more fantastic. The lighting seems fine to me. The lines between the figures seems about hmm... how do I word this... You know the classical statues with the little cherubs relieving themselves? A bit like that.

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    I might remove all the dashed lines. I wanted to convey story progression, but it seems to just clutter things up.

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    I like the looks of the paths on the ground they have a meandering quality that helps convey the terrain and add interest. Its just the arial ones that seem off to me.

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    Cool cool. I made some tweaks with the fonts and paths. I thought some nordic and viking fonts might be appropriate for a Nordic fairy tale. I think it looks better. Your feedback is super helpful.
    Now I should probably eat something....

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    Definite improvement! For a second I thought you'd changed something about the bear. Something about the change of font made him pop more for me as well.

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    Looking very good! I like the bear a lot!

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