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    Wip May/June 2014 Challenge: Kyraa's Last Refuge

    Kyraa was accepted by her fellow adventurers even though she was a witch. She proved to be very resourceful and saved their lives several times. But when she retired and left the group she found the average townsfolk treated her with suspicion & fear. Kyraa found an old tower on a small hill far enough away that she didn't have to constantly defend herself from misguided peasants.

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    The villagers didn't trust her. You could hear the angry mutterings as they passed in the market. "Witch" they would hiss as she passed. The mountain was her only retreat and she was glad for it.....

    Oh boy..... Looks great Bogie. If I could offer one bit of feedback; the grass texture is a little repetitive and perhaps a bit more shadow on the rock faces but other than that it looks awesome. (sorry about jumping into your story, sometimes I can't help myself... )
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    LOL! I like your take on the storyline. I didn't like that grass much either. I have some better ones, I just have to find them, but I wanted to get a rough draft posted before I go away for the weekend.

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    I like the mountains.

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    An imposing citadel never hurts to suitably impress those villagers when they realize they might need Kyraa's help and come calling. Even the gate is the more ominous for being wide open, she clearly fears nothing!

    Nice work, is there more to come?

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    Thanks guys! Last edit. Added more shadows, trees and a turret roof to the center of the structure.

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    Now I have to go get tonight's game ready.

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