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    "Overboard on the cannons"? I should think NOT

    I like the way they turned out. Maybe a blow-up of an emplacement in the upper left will allow you to show them in all their glory. *hint* *hint*

    /me luuuvs his guns/cannons
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    I'll make a fortress just for you as soon as this is done.

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    I really like where this one is going.... niiiiice
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hoel View Post
    I'll make a fortress just for you as soon as this is done.


    ahhh, now you are making me blush....
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    Wow, I'm very excited. That is the best work I've seen in the last month!

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    This is a seriously cool Fortress/Castle map. I mean, seriously. Mad props, kudos and all that that entails.
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    Ok. I've was down with the flu last week, couldn't get any work done. I'm up since this weekend (Alchohol is good for killing germs) I'm getting something done.
    -Right now I'm experimenting with a frame for the map but can't get it right.
    -I've added a grid, but I don't know if I'll keep it.
    -I did the scale as someone suggested, I tried to tie it into the overall map style.
    Any helpful comments or suggestions? I'm kinda stuck
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    I'm fine with the grid, it looks subtle enough to me. No suggestions on the frame, I think it looks fine. There's only two things I might tweak a lil: the scale bar...make it more like the frame in alternating hues and the glow on the smaller text seems to be more pronounced than the larger text, maybe drop the opacity or size a bit. Both of those are very minor things, though, and it's a great map.
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    This is very detailed.
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    Pretty much agree with Ascension.
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