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    Looks great so far.

    Is there a chance of getting some colour variation in the roofs? At the moment they are a very uniform grey.

    Um, that's all the C&C I can muster! This is a lovely map - and too am jealous of that lovely arena.
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    Quote Originally Posted by torstan View Post
    Looks great so far.

    Is there a chance of getting some colour variation in the roofs? At the moment they are a very uniform grey.

    Um, that's all the C&C I can muster! This is a lovely map - and too am jealous of that lovely arena.
    Thanks for the comments...

    Each ward's buildings have a different color; Craft Ward - blue, Maegus Ward - gold/yellow, Garden ward - green, etc. Granted they are somewhat subtle but I think they are identifiable.

    Maybe some of that's getting lost when I "dumb it down" for posting.
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    Yep, that was a little subtle. Now that I am looking for it I see it, though if I were pushed I might struggle to define precise boundaries between the regions even now.
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    My only recommendation would be to change the hue on the trees to a slightly warmer shade of green - at the moment it's quite cold, and clashes a bit with the softer tone used for grass.

    Other than that, looks great!

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    Map Pheeewww!!! Finally Done!

    OK, this beastie is finally done as far as I'm concerned. Are there some things that could be improved/changed/etc. - sure, but after all of the shoulder wrenching hours of work I am simply burned out on this map.

    I'm proud of the way it turned out and hope to find some place in CWBP for it - regardless of how well it does in the challenge.

    So enjoy, and please still feel free to leave C&C.

    Also since several of you commented specifically on the racetrack/Circus Maximus, I have also included a .PSD of just that in case anyone was interested in how I did it.

    Good luck to all the entrants, this month's is really going to be a tough vote.

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    Absolutely stunning! I really like the Noble's Ward...in today's world you can almost imagine the swimming pools in the gardens! Great city design, SG!

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    Great job SG! I might just have to vote for this map

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    Excellent map. I'm very impressed

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    This turned out great! Repped

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    Map OK I Lied...Here's the final version

    Just some minor tweaks to some of the text.

    There is a weird color change that happens to some of the trees around the druid circle (southern portion) when I reduce the resolution to post it. I had thought it was a 'tiling' issue with the texture and was going to fix it, but it isn't.

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