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      Thiagow is offline
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    Default Hello!

    Hello everyone!
    I'm Thiagow, Brazilian (yeah, sorry for the bad english), 16 years old, 6 years of experience with photoshop, and I guess that's it
    I've recently found this forum, and i'm looking forward to learn with you guys!

    And this is the first map that I've ever done. Any coments?

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    (lowered resolution, blame the ****ty upload rate)

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    looking good Thiagow, but I would lighten it up a bit on the east side. Hard to read some of the detail there. I understand the darkness to the west (unknown lands behind a wall of mountains, but the known lands should be clearer imo.

    Welcome to the Guild, The Mappiest Place on the Web. and have some rep for a nice map in your first post
    Art Critic = Someone with the Eye of an Artist, Words of a Bard, and the Talent of a Rock.

    Please take my critiques as someone who Wishes he had the Talent

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    Welcome to the Guild Thiagow! That's a nice first map, but I agree with Korash about the darkness around the edges. Look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh

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