Welcome to the Guild Neite! Wish you all the best in writing your book. As to the maps, I don't think your scanner does them justice. Your outline looks nice but it's a bit fuzzy. You may wish to either invest in a better scanner, or purchase a tablet so that you can draw mads digitally. This is especially the case if you wish to publish these maps. Also, you may wish to check out some of the tutorials here which can help give you some direction about how to add color and texture to your maps.