Welcome to the Guild Caelo! Congrats on completing your first map. Are the hand drawn elements your own? One thing worth pointing out is that some of the elements (e.g. the hills and mountains) appear quite fuzzy, especially in contrast to other elements, such as the town icons. Another minor point is that to my eye the digital effects you've used in this map, particularly Bevel & Emboss, do not appear to me to be well suited to the otherwise hand-drawn feel of the map. I think the overall presentation would be stronger if you omitted these. At any rate, nice to meet you and look forward to seeing more of your work in the days ahead.