Welcome to the Guild!
Looks good. Except you have a River Violation. Do not worry, we all have made that mistake. (I made it a few times when younger).
The Violation occurs at the lake east of Riversend. The lake empties into two rivers. SOmthing that would never happen in the real world. If a Lake ever did have two exits, the water exodus would be such that eventually the level would drop to the point one river would dry up as an equilibrium between ingress and egress of water occurs with only one external river.