Thank you for the rep and especially for the nice comment, Bogie. From someone of your skill and experience, it really means a lot
Anytime Bogie! Yea that what I've figured
Continued The appended story on the last page of the entry hints that the expedition that found the shield sealed in a cave was mauled by a monstrous bear like creature. The other symbols in red are what red means to humans Danger. The wolves in a pack are deadly and the church because of the supernatural nature of this creature. Thanks as always for your advice. I guess I really failed to convey the nature of the beast ! I guess I should have made the path of travel from the cave to the meeting more prominent also.
Dear BOGIE thanks for the vote . It is traditional for me to solicit advice on my contest entries especially when they bomb so badly. It is the only way to Improve ! So if you can spare a few minutes what exactly was it that you personally found lacking in my entry “The Dark Journey “ Was it too simple ; Hard to understand : Too plain ?? Or something else ? I am asking so be blunt Thanks in advance for the advice ! It will help me Improve ! Sincerely lostatsea
They wouldn't want me there, I'm the author of 1001 ways to prepare goblin. My spiritual twin from DnD is the famine spirit.
Thanks for the latest rep, and the vote, Bogie, and for running a good challenge. THW
I forgive you
Thank very much for the rep! I really apreciate it comming from you!
You'd have beat me even if I had finished! Yours was great
Congrats on the lite Challenge!