Conversation Between Diamond and lostatsea

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  1. Thanks for the vote on The Corruption !
  2. Dear Guilder. It is traditional for me to solicit advice on my contest entries especially when they bomb so badly. It is the only way to Improve ! So if you can spare a few minutes what exactly was it that you personally found lacking in my entry “The Dark Journey “ Was it too simple ; Hard to understand : Too plain ?? Or something else ? I am asking so be blunt Thanks in advance for the advice ! It will help me Improve ! Sincerely lostatsea
  3. Thanks for your vote ! Any advice on what to improve ?
  4. Thanks for the rep on the prison challenge. Please tell me what you did and didn't like about it !
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