Photo 14 of 18 from Elyden

the shadow and the helix

Photo Added
06-06-2012, 02:34 AM
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Elyden
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vorropohaiah

Photo Comments

  1. T.A.Roe
    This is great. But I don't feel like the text is connected to the background, which is fine if that's what you were going for. Might be cool to see some bleeding of text into parchment. I realize you're not asking for advice on this; it's a completed work. Just throwing some ideas out there.
  2. vorropohaiah
    always nice to get some feedback the text is a 'fairy-tale' (so-to speak) in a religious/dystopian/steampunky world and i thought the exocet font worked well, though it's quite old now and my taste in fonts has changed since then... perhaps something less 'cartoony' in an updated version?

    thanks
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