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      jort is offline
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    Wip The Islands of Oblivion

    Hi everyone,

    This is my first map. I followed the overland tutorial for cc3 as provided on the product site. Please let me know what you think.
    The Islands of Oblivion-islands-oblivion.jpg

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    Looks like a nice map debut. Have some guild reputation for your first map post. A larger version will probably get you more feedback though.
    Hi ho, hi ho, it's off to work I go..

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    For a CC3 map, I think it looks great!

    maybe change the light brown city font to something darker, and get rid of the red glow behind the title; maybe replace it with an ink black glow. basically all your font colours could do with some work, but the map itself looks very good!

    oh, and larger map plz!

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    Rather than running into the sea, the rivers seem to stop just short of the coastline.

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    Thanks for your replies. I've created a new map (see new thread: The Kingdom of Loria) bearing your suggestions in mind.

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