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    Wip Huelien Commission

    This is a area map I am doing for sharlykng It's my first "commission"

    Basic map texture and landform outlines..
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    I think your colors are good but I think the texture is too bumpy...looks more like stone. Minor thing and easy fix, though.
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    I find it gorgeous! >< I don't understand how it would look like stone though; it looks more of like a rough parchment to me.

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    Kind of looks like a toasted cracker. Great. Now I'm hungry.

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    Congrats on your first commission jt!

    Looking forward to seeing how it all turns out!

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    Quote Originally Posted by rdanhenry View Post
    Kind of looks like a toasted cracker. Great. Now I'm hungry.
    My daughter said the same thing..

    sharlykng I'll move on to the rest now
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    Per some suggestions I toned the parchment texture down some. I can put it back if you'd prefer. I also started on some of the terrian features. I used a very muted color scheme to give the forest a little "life"
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    Here is one possible finished look..
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    I prefer the prvious one ><" But maybe put some faded/worn colours randomly around the map?

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    Quote Originally Posted by sharlykng View Post
    I prefer the prvious one ><" But maybe put some faded/worn colours randomly around the map?
    yeah I'm not really happy with this one either. i'll be working on it some more today.
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