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    Default Commission WIP

    This is a small slice of a commission I'm working on right now, which I'm reasonably satisfied with, but I wanted to toss it out on the forums here to see if anyone might have any comments about it, which I might then use to improve upon this
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    Looks good so far.
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    The colors look great, forests look good, and the mountain ridges are especially effective. You might consider lowering the opacity of the grunge/scratch overlay though; it's right on the borderline of being too distracting. Overall though - awesome.
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    looks really good... love the canvassy structure - the green pops alot but I don't know if that should be changed
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    Thanks for the comments guys

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    Update on this. Toned down the vibrancy somewhat, and finished the rivers and lakes. Some of the mountains need to be fixed up so that rivers don't run up and over mountain ranges, but that's being worked on
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    Finished version posted to the finished maps forum:

    http://www.cartographersguild.com/sh...176#post161176

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