I did take a look at the pdf. There's some interesting ideas in there. I like the nice blend of cultures and the believable relations. I assume the older map is the one in the PDF? Unfortunately I am not familiar with CC3 but I wonder if you could add some hilly terrain (the pdf suggests it should be hillier than it is but all I see are the snowspike mountains).
On a side note, I think your campaign document would look better with the text arranged in two columns per page. =P