nice fonts :) and good use of words and sounds that evoke the character and climate very well.
i'm not sure if its the downscaling to upload the image but the river labels are near illegible. assume its the resizing, though the could be a bit bigger.
The current coast is much more fitting. *(how did you get the broken line on the outermost waveline?)
EDIT: and could you please add a scale-bar to at least one of your maps! i hate not knowing the scale :)