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    I suspect he means that the ends of the rivers, where they meet the ocean, are not finished. They don't blend into the water. Some even end before reaching the shoreline. I have to admit, I did not notice that the first time I looked at the map, only when I took a second look.

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    Humm maybe it´s that, but also I looked closely at them and they look rather dull, with few curves, it felt too right and perfect, it need some transformation. Also, Im finished with the mountains and forests, and so I started labeling, gave it a header, and worked the compass!
    Thanks again Bogie, Sapiento and Max for the advice on the rivers!
    WIP - Roncix-roncix_10.jpg
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    Another update!
    Changed the colours, added more labels (gosh sometimes its so boring) and also working on the flags and symbols for the factions!
    Hope you like.
    WIP - Roncix-roncix_11.jpg

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    Nice work so far I'd though recommend you try to get the same color/opacity on your black-dark brown? (border/title cartouche/compass) to make it more consistent.

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    i love the mountains, infact i wish my brain could come to grips drawing them half as good as you have rendered them

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    This is coming together beautifully, those mountains look amazing.

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    I like your rendering of the mountains, very clear and focused.

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    The mountains are indeed beautiful. After looking at them for a while I believe it's because most of them are connected in actual ranges, instead of just being individual mountains grouped together.

    I love the paper texture, as well.

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    A beautiful map. Keep up the good work.

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    I like this look quite a lot. I just want to ask a quick question though...While I was admiring the mountains around Cindrassil (I do have a bit of trouble reading the lake's name) I noticed that the lake does not have an outflow and I was wondering if that was intentional? For some reason that doesn't really bother me, but it did make me curious...
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