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    I'll update this tomorrow, when I have some more sleep, but for now, Vahren is a enclosed world, where only the land inside the great mountain range is safe, everything outside of said range is so vicious, large, and destructive that it is nigh impossible to live out there.

    Original drawing on paper:
    Vahren-paper-pen-map-2-001.png


    What I've done so far:
    Vahren-temporary-name.png
    (The long rectangle will eventually be a large wall blocking off that section of the savage wilds from the civilized/peaceful area.)


    This is for a Savage Worlds campaign i'm running with a few friends.
    More details will come, as soon as I have the time.
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    Looks very promising.

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    Very Impressive! I like the ranges, and the hills. They comein very naturely. I am already sure to rep it when its finished.

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    Thanks!
    Hopefully I can make it even better

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    Lookin' good, man. Great perspective.
    "I like a look of agony, because I know it's true."

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    I've decided to go with a different kind of river, more... Uhh, realistic, and less cartoony, I suppose.
    I've also begun fiddling around with colors, along with forests, as you can see.
    (Note: I didn't upload the whole map, as it's too large, so, you get to see the Valley (And some other pats of the map) that is home to the great Vampiric Dynasty, whom once nearly ruled the world.)

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    I have a minor nitpick, but it's one that you may already be aware of and will clean up in the next stage(s): The 'back' part of the forests - the side that faces away from the viewer. Right now, the length of the sketched in trees at the forest border (for lack of a better description) is the same as the front side, giving each woodland the illusion that it is a fence or a hollow bowl. Does that make sense? And like I said, it may be corrected in later stages anyway.
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    I agree with the others. This one has a lot of potential and looks good so far! Have you thought to add a couple of small lakes along the rivers?

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    Looks good so far. looking forward to see how it progress

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    It's looking good, I have a question about the river that drains the central valley. It looks like it forks and drains into two drainages (one to the east and one to the south).

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