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    Thank you so much Arsheesh for your input! Ill have to look into that tutorial! I forgot to put an update of my city labels... they where bugging me as well so i changed them. As you can see below!

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    I have added my cities, towns and capitals, now im thinking all i need to do is the roads then some clean up on boundaries and other areas and i just may be good to go, and i also need to clean up the labels a little bit. But any suggestions or ideas are welcome!!! Feel free to comment!

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    There are a few occasions where you borders cross city names. Makes it hard to read the names in these places. Make sure that the labels are above the borders... or change the layer style of the text.

    Personally I would like to see a little more contrast between land and sea... perhaps a little glow in a lighter blur at the coast.


    Everything else.... great map!#

    Lighter blur... oh my Gosh! I mean lighter BLUE of course!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Freodin View Post
    Personally I would like to see a little more contrast between land and sea... perhaps a little glow in a lighter blur at the coast.
    That would be my only suggestion.

    And yep, looks pretty darn good.
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    @ Freoding - Thank you! I think i have gone through and fixed all the city names that cross the borders. I also added some more contrast between the ocean and land.

    @ Diamond - thank you so much! I think i fixed it.

    Update: So i have fixed a few things, changed a few names, not many, and added a main road. Which im not to sure i like.

    Im getting to the point where i think i shall soon start overworking the map. And im finding myself wanting to move on to other projects. Im just not sure if i want to call this done yet.

    hmmm

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    The road looks a little wierd because of the horizontal lines you used to make it. Have you tried changing it to a circular brush? Might look better.

    Otherwise, I could not think of anything you should change. I like it very much the way it is!
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