Your text make no sense to me but it doesn't matter. What I'm concerned about is the redability of the labels. Using the shadow effect is a good thing the make them stand but it's too much. Also, I think using red is not a good idea, espacially for the font.
Other than that, it's a pretty good map.
Im sorry for the twisted post.. still I doubt I can do better
The map was printed on a size A1 paper, so there was no difficulty with reading the text. But you are right, next time I'll try more combinations.