Ummmm okay. Well I've decided to start putting a disclaimer on my comments, cause I have like NO map-knowledge, I just go by what I feel when I see things... and I see things weird, so.. Feel free to ignore me
Your coastline is really seperate from the water. It isn't necessarily a BAD thing... I've seen a lot of maps that look like that to me... but the point is, it looks like it's sitting above the water, like a cliff or shelf or a *plateau* So maybe whatever you did for your land mass, you could do to make your plateau thingy?
Of course, then you'd need to lose that effect for the land? Maybe? I don't know....
I REALLY like the look of the land... it's all... hilly but the effect isn't the same on the lower (tan) island... maybe cause it's more all-one-color? It just looks like crumpled up paper or something on that one (to me)
Big red spot?
Um the mountains in the snow and the ones down by that brown island look like they are falling over? Or maybe I'm looking the wrong way
Also.. what's that scorched area (It's okay to say "It's a scorched area DUH!" if you want...) It looks like it should be flat, or a crater or filled with half-burnt tree trunks. What happened?
Idk I really like it overall This is a really great first map (way better than anything I can do yet! )