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    Just a matter of personnal taste, but I think I prefer this forest to the previous one. Even if it's not screaming "jungle" indeed .
    And I agree with Clashio, this volcano is very cool!

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    I agree with both Chashio and Ilanthar - it doesn't really look like 'jungle' to me, but it does look awesome.
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    Oh my. I realy need a complete overhouwl.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Schwarzkreuz View Post
    Oh my. I realy need a complete overhouwl.
    Not necessarily. You've got a great paper background, color- and value scheme, interesting land forms with nicely drawn coastlines, your labels make awesome use of fonts, space, and an intriguing choice of names, your mountain style is fabulous (may need to adjust your size/placement in one area), and your forests look really cool (though, as stated, the two types are a little too different to work with each other in this set). Also in my opinion, the rivers look a bit too even and pixelated compared with the other line-work, though not terribly so. And you have good lava. One should never underestimate the power of an erupting volcano drawn on a map.

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    I have to thank -Max- for my Font improvements as he hinted me on several important Labeling rules, especially on larger Labels whose spread over countires and landmarks. Well I am happy to see you back and welcome your sharp eyes on my work, Chashio!
    These comments needs a bit to sink into my mind and I will show what will result from that.

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    By a complete overhaul do you mean you will NOT be using those beautiful mountains at all ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lezales View Post
    By a complete overhaul do you mean you will NOT be using those beautiful mountains at all ?
    Yes, exactly that

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    Well, I think what you have is pretty brilliant, but I'm very excited to see what a total overhaul will bring as well!

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    Did you use the same mountains in the last map you posted? It looks very good in this last sample I think, with no problem of "mountains range" question.

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    It was another set on the Skies of Fire Map.

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