Two things that strike me are the contrast in styles between the two maps - the one on the left looks handdrawn (although the repeated mountain symbols detract from the effect) and the one on the right looks like it's from a modern atlas. Not sure if those were the effects you were shooting for.
For me, I'd prefer to see more of a similarity of styles (at least in terms of modernity or lack of it) if the maps are to fit in one campaign - although individually both are really pretty maps.
The second striking element to me is the forest fill you've used in the first map. I really like it and don't think I've seen it before.
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