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    Map Zlau and Lapideas

    Hello everyone here are two continents of seven Zlau and Lapideas, in the world I have created called Vitam.

    And wanted to know your opinion on them.


    Zlau


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    Lapideas


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    Nice shoe

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    That is my knee good sir

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    Ooh alright

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    Nice knee!

    Anyway, welcome to the guild and have some rep for jumping right in with a map!

    A few suggestions, though:

    - right now your map suffers from the old "must-fill-every-inch-of-paper-sheet-with-landmass". Give the coastline more water around it. Then you also have more space to vary the coastline, because right now they look a bit too rectangular.
    - same thing with the rectangularness goes for the forests. spread them out a bit and let them blend into the countryside. Kudos for all the individual trees, though!

    Otherwise you're on a good path! Map away!

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