Good job, overall. Clean, functional - the monochromatic palatte lends to this feel. The mountains are fine, though the edges where mountain meets the ground cover, I would try to blur or feather this edge so the blend seems more natural and less abrupt. That's just a small quibble.
Regarding your roads, I think its difficult to tell the difference between the trails and the unpaved roads. Because the line width is so slight in difference and you didn't choose to use different colors as a means of differentiating them - its difficult identify the lesser roads.
Perhaps Varos is a dry, grassy place, without forests. I think it needs some color somewhere, otherwise good job.
PS: Have some REP, since you didn't have any, and this is certainly a decent map post!