I agree that the mountains (and also forests) are perhaps a little too subtle. But you can't amp it up too much, or it'll mess with the overall style and palette of the map. But perhaps it could be tweaked ever-so-slightly?
Even so, it's a very nice looking map!
Also: I too noticed the dry riverbed...
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