Try this revision:
I think Ravell's comment is on the money. Also, vary the blue fringe of the shore a bit and maybe make a beach or two. If the scale permits a rock or an island, a compass rose, or a decorative graphic would also be appealing.
Great! It's getting better all the time.
If you want more variation with the trees set a dark and a light green of slightly different hues as forground/back color and go to brush settings, set the color dynamics to have 50-100% for/back jitter, 20% hue jitter and 10% for the rest. If you want more uniform, lower the values. That's how I did.
You could sharpen up the shores a bit too...
yeah that them thar hills under them thar trees !!
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I've revised the map again, to make the beaches less blurry, more sandy.
Very nice, me likee.
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