What software are you using?
- I like the general layout of your map, like the landmasses.
- I also like the fonts you used.
- The thick black line along the coasts make it look like the land is floating above the sea.
- What are the lines along the coast in the water? It looks a bit weird. They are even in the lakes I see.
- You should add an effect to the red text, like a glow, to make them stand out more. Some names are difficult to read.
That's it for now. The thick black coastlines and the added lines in the water really tend to draw my attention. So it's hard to judge the terrain. Otherwise this is turning into a good map I think.
Have some reputation for posting this map!