I think it's pretty damn cool! It still looks a lot like Pasis his maps (well, why wouldn't it after following his tutorial?) but I see you added some of your own stuff and it's looking good.
The mountains are very well done, although two of those fish grate mountains near each other are a bit too much for me. Your farmland looks exceptional (!) and I very much like the style on your cities (I actually like it better than the style Pasis is using). The swampland to the south and the little islands in the northern lake are very nice touches as well.
Really, the more I look at this map, the more I start wanting to rave
I am interested to see more progress, like roads and labels.
I am very much impressed by Pasis his work and it's great to see some spinoffs now. I am sure you will all learn from each other.
Repped for encouragement and because it's such a great start.