Hi, Eru, & welcome to the Guild.
Your map is just fine, although if you are seriously trying to create the storm of which it is within the eye, then I think you may have to work on not only the clouds but the overall "feel" of the map, for it is very bright & cheery as is, with pastel brights and simple symbols. While just fine in their own right, these do not give the impression of a world torn by storms. You may have to abandon Campaign Cartographer (2?) to edit-in these effects.
Also, there are very few rivers & only one forest; while you explain the latter in the text, it still seems a but unrealistic--although perhaps this map has a specific purpose for which these details are unnecessary?
Finally, a site partnered with the Cartographer's Guild, the Campaign Builder's Guild, may be a good place to ask for help on your project, for the CBG often engages in similar activities.
Take care & look forward to seeing more!