Okay... I'll be the first to mention this...
COLLOSSAL River Violations. These kinds of infringements could get you time inside...
#1 You have two rivers meeting with two other rivers and ALL of them join to the sea around Holmir. Some of those need to:
a) not be joined
b) not be joined to two different seas
I would recommend the river going past Jalfole be redirected to have its source in the mountains near the desert (also helps explain the desert since the runoff all goes into that river and out to the sea).
Two of the other rivers around Holmir need to start in the nearby mountains and not join each other.
#2 See #1 but just look at Riverview instead of Holmir. Same problems, different location.
Only other C&C is:
- maybe adding some variation into the Popsicle Jungle of Grelm. Trees could do with some work and less of an iceblock shape. I feel like they were created by Paddle Pop. (google it if you don't know the brand).
- maybe changing the font in your compass rose. It doesn't match the rest of the map and looks like it is starkly out of place. The rose itself is nice though. I like it.