Mmmmmpig - Good call. I'll see about adding more highlight. I am still thinking about how/where to add some lava leaking out the side, as per your suggestion--it might add some color which is one thing this map is really lacking.
Immolate - I think I've made everything more consistent. If you still see anything that looks wrong, please call me out on it.
Tilt - Also a good idea. I've shrunk the path in this new version and looped it around beneath too.
Took some of the sage advice of the forum members, corrected some spelling errors (thanks StillCypher) also trying another configuration for the parchment thing on the side.