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    Wip Valkyrie Utility Craft (WIP)

    These is one of the first drafts of my latest addition to Ships of the Black Desert: The Valkyrie Utility Craft

    More pics, and a walk-through of the design process, are available here.

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    looks good, looking forward to seing it finished ... oh, and we don't have trolls here ... only the rpg-kind at least
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    Looks like a fine start...
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    A little modification, and the addition of my first draft for the interior. Enjoy!
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    the lines are a little thick in the exterior map, but otherwise very nice - maybe you should make a 3D-cut out thing to show were levels are placed on the craft
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    Default Final Elvation and Cutaway

    Here are the final plans for the elevation and cutaway. I am now working on cleaning up the interiors and making the plan view.
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    I like this! Repped.
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    More progress pics:
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    Map Maps are DONE!

    YAY! This has been far and away the most complex spacecraft I've ever designed...It will go on sale on the 16th. Enjoy these last previews, and thanks for the imput!
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    Cool work. I think you should go over it though and do a lot of editing there is a lot of touch ups that can be made to make it more presentable. For example there is a lot of places you can see the round brush you used poking out the side of objects an lines, also places where the eraser tool has eaten away at the edge of a line, texture/coloring spilling over the edge of the line, inconsistencies in the lines. I know this is probably designed for a smaller print size then the resolution would indicate but when zoomed at 100% on my monitor I see a lot of small flaws.
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