Looks like a nice map debut. Have some guild reputation for your first map post. A larger version will probably get you more feedback though.
Hi ho, hi ho, it's off to work I go..
For a CC3 map, I think it looks great!
maybe change the light brown city font to something darker, and get rid of the red glow behind the title; maybe replace it with an ink black glow. basically all your font colours could do with some work, but the map itself looks very good!
oh, and larger map plz!
Thanks for your replies. I've created a new map (see new thread: The Kingdom of Loria) bearing your suggestions in mind.