Hi,

I've been lurking in the shadows for a while, and decided to try my hand at creating a map for myself.

He's my first attempt, by following a tutorial (i can't remember who wrote it, but I got it from here) called 'Saderan - a tutorial.' It's done entirely in photoshop but I don't think it looks right. Not entirely sure what's wrong with it, but was hoping someone here could point out the faults.

So, without further ado ...

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Thanks in advance for any pointers,
Jay