Reply With QuoteI think that the building lines are too thick compared to the rest. Overall, looks pretty good, though.
I've been worn out lately and combined with a soft deadline this has taken me longer to do than I feel it should. However, I am still making progress on it when I have the time and energy.
Here is an update. Pretty much everything is subject to change. I already plan to redo the one big building as I'm just not knocked out with how it looks. Too much like an apartment complex to me. I also plan to texture the buildings a tad. And finally I plan to do some more shading on the cliffs.
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I think that the building lines are too thick compared to the rest. Overall, looks pretty good, though.
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looking good, but I'm with Ascension on the building lines - they are a little heavy
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Yeah, I will be concentrating on the city area next so I will see how it goes. Hopefully, I'll get into this today.
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My only tweak is to have the ravine extend a bit farther out with the end being open enough for a mule or horse to get through.
I really like how the terrain has come alive.
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Added some texture to the buildings. Still might fiddle with the line thickness but I'm not sure if there is a lot I can do, that's just how my pencil came out.
I have to carry the canyon off the top of the page next but not sure if I'll get it done tonight or not, going to eat dinner in a second.
ps. Still have that pesky thumbnail issue
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One small tweak, perhaps a small lean to on the top of the front tall building? Thinking just goal post sort of poles with a blanket stretched out. Or a couple of them without the blanket for drying racks? Not sure if that is too small of a detail to add and still keep the great sparse look this has. That is why I rely on experts
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Latest update. One more saturated than the other, your choice.
Last edited by Jaxilon; 06-08-2011 at 06:04 PM.
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Personally, I think the more saturated version looks better. But both are good.
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I like the more saturated also, to my (not quite normal ;0 ) eyes it looks more natural.
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