Nice job, I.F, and welcome to the Guild. You're wrong though... fifth-grade sophistication? Pshhh. Grade-school-accessible tools or not, I don't know any fifth-graders mapping with credible shaded relief mountains, believable river networks, a pleasant palette.... no, you've got some good carto chops already. We look forward to seeing what else you devise, whether more pencil work, or digital. Really, what you have here IS digital .... just using camera, pencil, and paper as your input method :-).

If your more detailed map set offers the opportunity, about the only lack I see with Crotha is some foothills to go with those nice crags. And I know shallower relief is tougher to show - I bet you can, though.