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    Wip [WIP] First Attempt - please critique

    OK so here is my first run at an RPG Campaign World Map. Please critique as honestly as possible.


    EDIT: I decided to remove all the complicated island section in the south. Which do you think is better?

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    Last edited by Phlimm; 07-03-2012 at 03:22 AM.

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    Guild Artisan rdanhenry's Avatar
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    Complicated is good. Unless you want that bay for something, I'd keep the one on the left.

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    Nice outline but the outline stroke is a bit too thick. As to the islands, I don't really have a preference either way.


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