The Voyages of Branze MAP

[daeVArt]

Hello, I’m Newbie here, I’ve just Finished my 1st Map ^^V, I would like to share, and I Hope you can give me some Critique, Suggestion, or Ideas for this Map. I used Ascension Atlas style for Photoshop as this base Tutorial, with lil bit add from another Tutorial as well. Thanks to the Creator of every Tutorial, I can freely read and Study every Tutorial even without Internet Connection (The Worst of my life >.<).
And after read lots of Tutorial, I’ve decides To at least Create my own World With My own hand, It’ll be lots of Fun anyway, and rewarding of course. And yes, I’m really enjoy spent my time Creating the Map, it’s really Fun when you can craft something from nothing with your own hand. Whatever the result, is the reward. So from now on, I’ll be part of this Guild, Learn and study together, and hopefully, all of you can accept me here.

Anyway, The Map was used for my Mini Story, the name was “The Voyage of Branze Cogspring – Infinite Dimensional Plane unveiled” It’s part of my Sentinels Project (Writing Novel Project, So far I’ve done write a Novel, and want to make the world map of my own world). Thank you ^^V

-daeVArt
Ps: Sorry for my bad English, It was my 4th language >.<