The cartoon style is funny
It's very colorful. I like the use of all the different castles and buildings for the towns and cities. Fun stuff.
Oh, and you're doing fine with your English, so far. It's all good.
And here i was expecting to see a map of first age Middle-earth
The map has a very cartoonish style. It has its charms
I'm trapped in Darkness,
Still I reach out for the Stars
good job, have alittle rep. I like the change of pace that the cartoon style gives.
Wow great! What program did you use for this?
Nice work! About the only suggestion I would make if you plan to do more like it would be that the title font you used is plain and modern, up next to the handwritten-style other labels. Don't just stretch that city font bigger, since its irregularity would not be believable five or ten times bigger. But you could probably find a font that looked more like a cartographer's proud, decorative labeling of his masterwork. Have a bit of reputation, and do show us some more!