This is just the Spiritual Structure that i am using in my world creation. What i need is some discussion about the places, if it is all right following dogmatic concepts, and the map style and if possible, some typos correction
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Basically the cosmos has three cores scattered throughout the universe. These cores only can be sustained with a quintessential poer that only humans can feed: faith. Three planets throughout the cosmos are in the their own universes and create around themselves, their own spiritual boundaries.
Known as Haled the cosmos, the Earth is the world where the will does not predominate, the reason is the structural basis of the mortal soul and society. Egos, called Manah,'s world, driven by the desire and hope, where magic still dwells and rules governing physical. Aos, the world Avan-teh, the existence of equilibrium, where magic and reason coexist in harmony.Based on this structure, the existence of the First Heaven and Limbo spans 11 layers, 5 of them toward the heavens and 6 of them directed to Limbo.
Up into the heavens, we have three sixths heavens housing simplest caste of angels, each world has its own heavens . Inferno, as it is called the fifth heaven, harbors potentially transmutable souls waiting for the return. The fourth Heaven, Angelica, is the plan governed by Angels, controlled by Archangels. Angels can surf heavens below, however, the fourth Heaven is the limit to rise. The third heavens, known as Eden, is home of the pure souls, soul with a and spirit illuminated live on this plane.
Supreme and powerful, these beings have a spark of the creator keeping them alive. Eden has a direct connection with the three cores. Archangels and powerful Angels , waged in a journey to the cores returning to the gardens of Eden.
Paradise, the second heaven is where the own creator used for creating the archangels. Reserved only for the gods, this heaven has a connection with the Gentiles Axis. While connected to the fourth heaven, only archangels have light enough to visit this heaven. Enlightened from the cores who ventured gardens of Eden about to light up, became deities living in Paradise.The first heaven is the Creator's Secret. Only the self Yahweh and the archangels know this place. is the top of the cosmos, the abode of God.
The seventh heaven is called the existence consecrated by the Wheel of Fortune, which controls the rotation of the cores in the Gentiles Axis. The seventh heaven is precisely the plan that hosts and supports the existence of three cores.
Umbra and Deep Umbra have the same constitution, the basic difference is that the Umbra is specific for each core and more evolved spirits emerge for. Deep Umbra is is a shared between the three cores. Heaven is the first step to the rest of the spirits. Those who will not return under development and have not been to Inferno. Hence the spirits or turn to the core or fall to the lower realms. Purgatory, Gehenna and Jyhad are the three kingdoms of penance for the souls in evolution. Here is where souls are directed back to the Heaven or in the fields of Sheol.
Sheol is the deepest place of the lower realms. Currently under the domains of Lucifer, this place is dominated by demons, fallen souls at this level are slaves to the demons will.
However, even the lords of darkness can not sympathize with some souls, these are discarded to the Hell. The realm of eternal burning fire of penance souls. Here for an eternity souls suffer, until redeemed or until they are discarded forever in Limbo.
Limbo is the infinite space of Nothing.