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Thread: Feb/March 2013 Lite Challenge Entry: Oh Tarn!

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    It is a very nice drawing. I would like to see a small river feeding the lake from the valley between the left peak and the center peak. I believe the scale of the map is just large enough to show the stream/river that would be about there. A waterfall coming of the center peak an feeding the lake would also be appropriate and beautiful, but that would be quite hard.

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    Looks great !!
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    I think this is pretty much done now. Although I might make some minor adjustments tonight, if I have the time.

    Here it is. Thanks for all the helpful comments.

    ### Latest WIP ###
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    Great challenge entry! Good Luck!

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    Again, thanks to all for the encouragement and comments on this map. Here is the final-final version. I didn't like the title on the last version and I moved around a few things. I also added a little lake cabin and a fishing rowboat.

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    Now to let others vote.
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    This is a lovely piece, but something about the water doesn't sit right with me. I think it's the color; it just seems out of place to me, it's too bold and distracts from the rest of the piece. Other than that, I like what you've done here.

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    The little river/stream behind the island seems to "Continue" into the larger river instead of ending at the bank/edge . Hmmm looks like it overlaps may be a better way to put it. Any ways very nice looking entry . Have some REP.
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