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    Oh yeah, that works better for the label. Mountains look great!
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    Overall this is looking really nice matter, although I don't think the bright blue within your neat lines really compliments the style of the map. I'd try a more muted color with more green, brown or yellow.

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    Even though I think it is good this way, I agree with arsheesh, maybe a more muted color would be better in this case.

    Very good work on the mountains btw, they are amazing
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    Bit of an update.
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    This looks really good, I am personally very fond if the city icons. The sketchyness of them gives it all a very natural tone, like someone actually drew up the map by hand. =)

    The fortress out in the water looks a bit weird though.

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    Oh whoops! That's an accident.

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    This, might have knocked the map off it's balance; I really don't like the idea of hand drawing every tree, but making a brush for trees looks kind of cheap.
    I don't know.
    also there's a key that I might remove because there's a big gap down at the bottom there.
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    What you might do is integrate the key into the upper right corner of the map itself; you've got an area up there that's blank right now, and unless you're planning on adding a lot of important stuff in there, the key would probably fit (scaled down, of course), with minimum effort.

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    Ah thanks, that looks a bit better.
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    This looks very nice! Mountains are very good.
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